Thaaaaaaat's better

[seriousfic]

Did a final dialogue run-through on my Little Bang Glee superhero AU. It flows better now. And it actually has, like, a subtext, with all the characters dealing with their big gay feelings in different ways, some by becoming supervillains. Five days!


"Yes, I heard." Quinn chucked the book in the trash. Stupid idea anyway. "Anyone ever tell you that you come on real strong?"

Rachel shrugged. "Someone once told me I have a Type-A personality. I think I have an A+ personality."

"Yeah, well, I'm getting this real weird feeling that I'm your project and I don't like it."

"I don't project!" Rachel said defensively, facing Quinn and clasping her hands to her chest. "It's just that Finn always made it sound like the two of you were on your own. You moved here from Ohio together, he spends all his time coaching high school football, you spend all your time whatevering, so your only real social circle is teenage boys. I mean, Finn's social circle… I don't think there's anything inappropriate going on with you and teenage boys."

"So, I'm not your project, you just wanna take care of me?"

"I want to be your friend. You know, since Finn was my friend and he was your friend too… he'd want someone to look out for you. And I can be very nurturing. I work at a vet's office!"

"Don't let me keep you from the vet, Rachel, I have a lot of friends."

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Hmm, let me know when you post. I think this is going to be a great read :)