Starfire w/ Penis Part 3

[seriousfic]

My God, man, if you want to write erotic lactation, write pregnancy-fic like a normal person! Goddamn!

Now, we've already discussed how Raven could hypothetically increase her bust size with her demonstrated powers, but causing herself to lactate is decidedly further from canon both in Why she would do such a thing and How she would accomplish it.

Add to the "things that do not come off well in kawai" list: Giving a shemale a tit-job. Although Starfire's line there... I think it's supposed to be funny? In a horrifying sort of way.

And man, Raven must be a heavy sleeper to not only get through the physical act of lovemaking, but the very heavy musk of an erect penis without waking. Unless you care to speculate that Starfire's boy-spell causes an odorless penis, but really now, you're just starting to get a little silly.

Comments

[seriousfic.livejournal.com]

You asked for it...

[lurkslikefox.livejournal.com]

Gah! Good God, she sleeps soundly. And it's a good thing she is asleep cos if Raven tried to sit up with those things attached to her, she'd probably snap in half.