It amazes me how you have this meticulous ability to create such depth of feelings, motivations, intrigue and surprise with so few words! It's an economy that is never lacking and always satisfying.
Loved this line to describe Dahlia's dilemma: A fanatic's sorrow, that the sinful world had driven her to this.
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Date: 2011-07-09 12:19 am (UTC)Loved this line to describe Dahlia's dilemma:
A fanatic's sorrow, that the sinful world had driven her to this.
Great update! I thank you!
Austin