Date: 2011-03-29 01:49 am (UTC)
Wow. Your characterization is PERFECT! So much so that, even as I've grown to almost like alt-Liv, and mostly like her here, I still want to shake the glib out of her a little. And lo and behold, you even acknowledged THAT quality of hers:

"There are rumors that you can be a little smug."

That is hilarious and magnificent. I also loved the Titanic reference--I see what you did there!

"I know, that is freaky, right?" Lincoln says in a rush, sitting back down. Hah! Yenta Lincoln, sucked back into the gossip vortex. I could hang out with that guy, I'm thinking.

Well done!

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