See, they can't wait until you post the next chapter!
I reread this just to catch the minute changes you may have made in the absence of my rambling notes. The red-and-Blue Blue realization because of Chloe's fear for Clark works very well (it does make a better trigger for memories than the healing). You made her very conflicted and I love it!
![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
no subject
Date: 2009-05-18 07:40 pm (UTC)I reread this just to catch the minute changes you may have made in the absence of my rambling notes. The red-and-Blue Blue realization because of Chloe's fear for Clark works very well (it does make a better trigger for memories than the healing). You made her very conflicted and I love it!
fine. I know I should be beta-ing. :p