This was really good. Even though I'm a die-hard MxM shipper and want them to be in the throes of passion at all times, I love fics that have them sparring and arguing with each other -- because that's what they do.
Excellent job.
One minor nitpick though: Smelt *never* means smelled. They aren't interchangeable. I even looked it up, just to be sure. Smelt always means a specific small, pungent fish. So seeing it used in the fic sort of took me out of it a little. I don't know that it will bother anyone else ... I'm just a nazi about stuff like that.
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Date: 2008-01-22 07:49 pm (UTC)Excellent job.
One minor nitpick though: Smelt *never* means smelled. They aren't interchangeable. I even looked it up, just to be sure. Smelt always means a specific small, pungent fish. So seeing it used in the fic sort of took me out of it a little. I don't know that it will bother anyone else ... I'm just a nazi about stuff like that.