Actually, to be perfectly honest, I'd give that a pass without thinking twice. (Or thinking three times, at least.) "Suspicious detective with a gut feeling takes on powerful evil corporation" is so overdone that it's a charcoal briquette.
Plus, it sounds like the kind of writeup that would only really work as a novel or something.
no subject
Date: 2009-10-04 06:15 pm (UTC)Plus, it sounds like the kind of writeup that would only really work as a novel or something.