I have a great deal of love for this story. Especially, oddly enough, Lois and Clark. They are themselves and also likable! It's like a fanfic miracle!
The Magnificent Bastard's pep talk to Davis was fabulous and reminded me of his best S1 self, and I really enjoyed the way you tied up the Namaan/Sageeth thing.
Finally, the Chloe/Davis = AWESOME. All sweet and awkward and angsty and guilt-ridden and teenager-y (what? it's a word!) and, oh yeah, EPIC. Both flawed kids trying to grow up and deal with all the crazy shit Smallville can throw at them. They did pretty good, I think.
Anyway, thank you for writing this, and I look forward to reading more of your work.
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Date: 2010-12-22 07:47 am (UTC)M
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I have a great deal of love for this story. Especially, oddly enough, Lois and Clark. They are themselves and also likable! It's like a fanfic miracle!
The Magnificent Bastard's pep talk to Davis was fabulous and reminded me of his best S1 self, and I really enjoyed the way you tied up the Namaan/Sageeth thing.
Finally, the Chloe/Davis = AWESOME. All sweet and awkward and angsty and guilt-ridden and teenager-y (what? it's a word!) and, oh yeah, EPIC. Both flawed kids trying to grow up and deal with all the crazy shit Smallville can throw at them. They did pretty good, I think.
Anyway, thank you for writing this, and I look forward to reading more of your work.