So, every time I read something of yours, I know I'm going to get something starkly beautiful. This fic is no exception. As always, you show a lot with a few words, eg. the very first line of the fic. The exchanges Scott has with Emma then Logan are restrained but no less emotional. My favourite line is this: “No. Jean slept there.” Scott crossed his arms, let his head drift back. “Too big for one person.”
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Date: 2009-05-22 02:40 am (UTC)“No. Jean slept there.” Scott crossed his arms, let his head drift back. “Too big for one person.”
fwuh.