Wow, this was really interesting! I love how you write Clark, Lois and Chloe ... so cute! The Clois was adorable ... I really liked how Lois knew right away that it was Clark she kissed.
The dialogue was fantastic ... you nailed all their characters and I adored the ending!
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Date: 2008-10-29 07:16 pm (UTC)The dialogue was fantastic ... you nailed all their characters and I adored the ending!
Wonderful job!