http://museofspeed.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] museofspeed.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] seriousfic 2008-08-03 07:35 am (UTC)

That is really hot. Another awesome fic!

Though it seems cut off.

“My name! My name!” Barda’s position on top of Knockout allowed her to easily slap Knockout’s ass with all her strength. It stung, though the red imprints she left were hard to see for the way Knockout’s rough skin flushed. “Say it, bitch!

Is that how it's supposed to end?

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