mark_clark ([identity profile] mark-clark.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] seriousfic 2008-06-28 05:08 pm (UTC)

Another wonderful fic. I'm glad I finally had the time to read all three of your Spectacular Spider-Man fics.

Spider-Man was put in a tough position when he wanted to bring in Felicia. I liked how she thwarted his first attempt at bringing her in. It was a good thing he didn't give up when he took her from her apartment, webbed her up and just talked to her. For a while there, I thought that Peter would tell Felicia how he became Spider-Man and why he does what he does. His words to her were just as powerful. I think that his words got to her and that she could've been considering becoming his partner when he unmasked. That shocked Felicia but she still liked him any way.

A perfect ending to a great story.

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