http://endgirl.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] endgirl.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] seriousfic 2011-07-30 05:02 am (UTC)

Unnnnnnnnnnnngh. This is even hotter than part one, which I did not think possible. I just don't know what to do with myself.

I love how you have included bits of ~feelings alongside the utter, delicious depravity. For exampling: She had no idea what she could give to Kahlan that would be at all equal to what Kahlan was doing to her. Awww.

And of course:

"I love you," Cara said under her breath. [...] "I said I loved your cock" Oh, Cara. Mhmm, sure.

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