ext_49198 ([identity profile] fembuck.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] seriousfic 2010-05-12 10:56 pm (UTC)

This was magnificent. I honestly really don't even have words to express how heartbreakingly beautiful it was. Their devotion to each other, especially in a place like that and after all that they had been through and were continually put through was heartrending. I heart them so much, so very, very much.

And Cara's unease with her body and what it was doing to her were so very Cara and well-presented. Honestly, everything to do with them worrying about the baby, and trying to make the baby strong and what great things he/she was destined for nearly broke me knowing what will happen to the child.

Super great job.

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