http://onlyobserving.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] onlyobserving.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] seriousfic 2009-09-16 04:03 am (UTC)

omfg. You honestly made me cry with that last bit. And, I mean... I don't cry too easily... But, geez, when I do.... I'm going to look like crap tomorrow. THANKS A LOT *bursts into even more tears*

That was so... Poetically beautiful. And I honestly started crying super hard when I thought that Davis was going to transfer Doomsday back into him (but he didn't, THANK YOU!) and it was just.. Just... Just.........

SO WHAT DOOMSDAY *SHOULD* HAVE BEEN.

THIS IS WHAT THE SEASON 8 FINALE SHOULD HAVE BEEN.

IT SHOULD HAVE BEEN POETIC, AND BITTERSWEET, AND BEAUTIFULLY DESTRUCTIVE, AND CLARK SHOULD HAVE GOTTEN THE SHIT KICKED OUT OF HIM. AND *THIS*.

*THIS* IS HOW DAVIS SHOULD HAVE DIED. HE SHOULD HAVE DIED FOR *SOMETHING*. HE SHOULD HAVE DIED SAVING THE WORLD FROM DOOMSDAY, BECAUSE THAT IS WHAT HE *DESERVED*, GOD DAMMIT ALL TO HELL.

Well, congratulations. Don't you feel proud. You just elevated Doomsday's rating in my mind from "Absolutely Atrocious. I will only watch the piece of sh*t when I'm having a SV maraton." to "I REFUSE TO WATCH THAT EVER AGAIN."

Why can't you write for Smallville? Seriously. People always look down on fanfic because they think its 12-year-olds giggling and LOLing as thei maak tyypos. But its not. It's showing up the SV writers. *points to what you just wrote* Cause, seriously... that jut PWNed their asses. And there wasn't even any special effects (well... I guess there was, they were just curtesy of my I-MAG-IN-A-TION *SpongeBob hands*)

Sorry, I've rambled enough. I just.... That was really beautiful. It was so eloquent and wonderful and just... *shakes head*.

Oh, and ROTFLMAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO at that nice little closing pic. Seriously.... I think I might have peed just a LITTLE right then and there as I pissed off my sleeping cat and dog. Seriously.

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