ext_305897 ([identity profile] faile-neume.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] seriousfic 2009-08-22 12:11 pm (UTC)

Hey look, someone used the "it was just a dream" cliche and it actually worked well! Well done.

Peter's banter was fantastic and was his awkward, trying to avoid the MJ topic. I chucked out loud at Peter's "I.. really don't want her to that."

All around brilliant, I hope there's more.

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