Chlavis date? SQUEEEEEE!!!!! I really loved this chapter it really was beautiful. I disagree about christians in stories are usually bigots or serial killers but I know what you mena a lot o times it can be shown as fanatical and a bit deluded. I think in a lot of stories I enjoy you have fanatical played off of the opposite of chirstians with pure intent. And I think that is what you did really well here. That scene of Davis just getting mad at the bible was intense and well done. It really showed that he doesn't want to be that fanatical serial killer guy who uses the bible as an excuse. And I love edning the scene with that verse from Ruth. I love that verse it's one of my faves. IT really speaks of freindship and loyalty and it was a nice segwey to showing Davis comforting Chloe. I think Chloe really does have that kind of uncanny loyalty that Ruth has. So it was really beautiful.

I really love that you stopped the back and forth Davis pulling away from Chloe thing. And giving him a little hope. It was really well done.

And the last part great cliffy and that is so Lex!

Great job and update soon! I can't for a Chlavis date!