ext_104135 ([identity profile] vagrantdream.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] seriousfic 2009-05-18 07:40 pm (UTC)

See, they can't wait until you post the next chapter!

I reread this just to catch the minute changes you may have made in the absence of my rambling notes. The red-and-Blue Blue realization because of Chloe's fear for Clark works very well (it does make a better trigger for memories than the healing). You made her very conflicted and I love it!

fine. I know I should be beta-ing. :p

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