ext_12075 ([identity profile] likeadeuce.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] seriousfic 2009-03-15 05:06 am (UTC)

Nice work.

It makes me wish we'd gotten Jon telling him 'Nothing ever ends,' as in the book, but this definitely captures the sentiment -- even in this version where the plan works and he gets everything he wants, he loses himself.

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