I love this fic because of the action- you write it so well!
Also, I'm assuming that from the dream in chapter 13 Lois figures out that Clark is superman. interesting how you used the word taint that's a good way of putting it, and so now that they've both acknowledged that through their own ways and he's seemingly "flying away" from it all, how is she going to react? will she go after clark? stay with richard? ahahah this is all SO GOOD. action! drama! awesome characterization! PERFECT ^_^
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Also, I'm assuming that from the dream in chapter 13 Lois figures out that Clark is superman. interesting how you used the word taint that's a good way of putting it, and so now that they've both acknowledged that through their own ways and he's seemingly "flying away" from it all, how is she going to react? will she go after clark? stay with richard? ahahah this is all SO GOOD. action! drama! awesome characterization! PERFECT ^_^